Correct+the+Mistakes

Wendy:
===I will tell you about my holiday, but unfortunately, my English is a bit rusty, so you will need to correct my mistakes for me. (Click on Edit - copy and paste my paragraph at the bottom of the page, then add your corrections (underline them or bold them). Put a line before and after your contribution. Make sure you put your name first.===

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Wendy: Mi holiday was very quite because both my childs was oversees, and I was missing them. Also, I got sick on Chrismas Day and have been in many pain. Also, I had a other drama, when our car was broke into, and much things were stole.

This was __Suzie's correction__ which she pasted into the discussion. Can you see any mistakes which she hasn't corrected? Wendy:
 * My** holiday was very quite because both my **children were** oversees, and I was missing them. Also, I got sick on **Christmas** Day and **had** been in **much** pain. I had **an** other drama, when our car was broke into, and **many** things were **stolen**.Posted Jan 26, 2006 7:06 pm

Petra's correction: My holiday was very __quiet__ because both my children were __overseas__, and I was missing them. Also, I got sick on Christmas Day and had been in much pain. I had __another__ drama, when our car was __broken__ into, and many things were stolen.Posted March 6, 2006

Jabe: __**
 * __My__** holiday was very **__quiet__** because both **__of__** my **__children__** **__is oversea,__** and I **__am__** missing them. I got sick on **__Christmas__** Day and have many **__pains__**. Also, I **__have__** **__an__** other drama, when our car was **__broken__** into, and many things **__was__** **__stolen.


 * __Lek__**: **My** holiday was very quite because both **of** my children were oversees, and I was missing them. Also, I got sick on **Christma** Day and **had** been in many pain. Also, I had **an** other drama, when our car was broke into, and **many** things were **stolen**.