The+Easter+Holidays

=1/5/06= =Welcome back after the holidays.=

This is a picture of the headland at Red Rock, where I went camping over Easter.

Here is my story. As usual, my English is a bit rusty, so I would like you to correct it. Then add your own story.
Then I drive to sydeney in my new car and it was so comftable. In sydeny, I staid by a old freind and atended a 3-day conferense. After that, I visited my mother on 3 days. She is 87 and is loosing her memory, witch is very sad. Then I come home and workt - in the garden, in the house and at the college.
 * Wendy**:I gone to Red Rock on thursday after work. We spend 4 day camping at the camp ground their, with 3 other familys. We had lovly whether, and we swim in the see and the river. We also go for a lots of walks.


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Then I drove to Sydeney with my new car and it was so comfortable. In Sydeny, I stayed at a old freind and attended to 3-days conference. After that, I visited my mother 3 days. She is 87 and she loose her memory, which is very sad. Then I came home and worked - at the garden, in the house and at the college. (Jabe)
 * Wendy**:I went to Red Rock on Thursday after work. We spent 4 days camping at the camp ground there, with 3 other families. We had lovely weather, and we swam in the sea and the river. We also go for a lots of walks.

Then I drive to sydeney in my new car and it was so comftable. In sydeny, I staid by a old freind and atended a 3-day conferense. After that, I visited my mother on 3 days. She is 87 and is loosing her memory, witch is very sad. Then I come home and workt - in the garden, in the house and at the college.
 * Wendy**:I gone to Red Rock on thursday after work. We spend 4 day camping at the camp ground their, with 3 other familys. We had lovly whether, and we swim in the see and the river. We also go for a lots of walks.

Then I drive to sydeney in my new car and it was so comftable. In sydeny, I staid by a old freind and atended a 3-day conferense. After that, I visited my mother on 3 days. She is 87 and is loosing her memory, witch is very sad. Then I come home and workt - in the garden, in the house and at the college.
 * Wendy**:I gone to Red Rock on thursday after work. We spend 4 day camping at the camp ground their, with 3 other familys. We had lovly whether, and we swim in the see and the river. We also go for a lots of walks.

Jabe: I have a very quiet Easter holiday this year. During the holiday weeks I have to go to E.T.C (Enterperting Training Centre) for the computer course. I have been take my two son went to the movie couple time.On the weekend I took my sons togo to golf (driving range) .On the second week I have a friend came from Sydney to visits, and they stayed for a couple day. Unlucky, one night I went to my friend place for his daughter's birthday party. I parked my car in front of my friend house's drive way. Some one broken my car window, and stolen my wallet and mobile phone. I have to report and request all my drive licence, master card, ATM cards, medicare card, health card, and the membership cards. I have to running around everywhere to request all my staffs, and made too busy for a while. Happiest, I passed my computer course. (beginning class)